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I knew I was going to steal him. Yes

I saw it in my mind. That feeling.
   unshakeable feeling.

He walked. Talked. Smiled. To them.

The ones
to them

He wasn't their whore. He wasn't theirs to see, smell, taste, to see, smell, taste, touch, taste, see, touch, smell, taste, touch, see, taste, touch, smell, taste, see, touch, see, touch, taste, see, smell, taste

  He was not theirs.

I would take

stop his prostitution.

What belonged to me.
Take.

I would take him.



Where was the beginning?
Here.
There.

Beginning? Or end?
It's the same.


He was whored.

He was Misused.      Mishandled.


He was a whore to them.

I merrily saved him. That boy.
That boy

that young boy

Like her, so like her.

pristine white tresses, luscious, cream-white skin I could dip my fingers into, powder-pink lips perfectly ripe, supple belly padded firm it would carve almost divinely, lean so lean, the fingers would make such a lovely sound between the teeth, the orbs indigo and moist, the youth was fresh on him poignant ripest, the bare white neck fleshy and tender rarely exposed, my mouth could water at the scent of that kept naked skin

oh yes he did cry when I took him

I said "don't be worried, I'll save you" he said "Who are you?" I said "My poor dear" he said "Who are you?" I said "I know you, I've watched you" he said "Let me see you" "poor dear, My poor dear" he said "That voice" "My tiny little pet"

little doll

he said "Where are you taking me"

You talk too much. You talk too much.

"Where are you taking me!" he said!

"you talk too much. you're talking. Too. Much."

and I struck his head upon the brick  

and he did not speak

and the quiet ate it up again
  And it was unpleasant.

But it won't be. Never again. It won't be.
That's why I took him. I wanted him. and he was mine.

And he was filled with sounds. He created them.


I liked his sounds.
That voice.
That voice.
It was all around.
no
In the air.
No.
For everyone to hear.

No!

They will not listen. They will not listen. Stop it. Stop hearing.

Stop hearing.
around and around

Stop hearing.
round and around

take your eyes off

what is mine.
what will be

I will make him mine.
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Persephone is a seriously warped and highly controversial piece. This is my first ever attempt at stream of consciousness. Feedback on grammatical "errors" will be considered invalid, unless the mistake is absolutely blatant, as many of these things are done intentionally. Critiques are NOT desired at this time.

deviantArt does not allow me to format the story as it should be read. If ever a reader desires a true copy of this story, please contact me through note and I will send you a digital copy of my personal Word file with the correct formatting. I think that it does add something, and is extremely vital to the reading.

While this is just the opening, if you see any slight disagreement, I would stop reading now before you get ahead. This is to save you (and me) any trouble. There aren't many pervsions "Persephone" doesn't touch on.

Another thing I ask is that (in the rare event that this actually happen?), if you do enjoy the story, please, please, PLEASE, do NOT attempt to do any sort of fanart of these characters. They are extremely personal to me.

Thank you for your time :heart: I apologize for sounding harsh all up there and junk.

Artwork by ~chuiyi

©2011 versailles6

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~buttonsley Mar 1, 2012   Writer
Put this in your profile. Go. Do it now. I have only read the first bit, but it is powerful and attention grabbing.
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._. oh my, I'm not sure about that :XD:
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~ME-Jones Aug 8, 2011  Student Writer
Just finished reading what you sent me. And all I can say is... daaaamn.... It was REALLY good! And darnit dA, not letting you upload in correct format! >.<
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Wow, thank you very much ^^ I'm so glad you liked it! And yes, it does suck that dA has to mess it all up, but I think having the option available to see it in it's original format is very helpful, and many people have been interested in seeing it as such, so I am very, very grateful. Thank you! :tighthug:
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~ME-Jones Aug 8, 2011  Student Writer
No problem! It's amazing and very powerful!

*is squished!*
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~ME-Jones Aug 9, 2011  Student Writer
Lol, no problem! :)
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Mood: Love ~iquares13 Jun 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i just finished reading it in the correct format that u sent me, and all i can say is wow. just beautiful. i am so impressed that i read it a second time, no joke. thank u 4 taking ur time and sendin it to me. plz, if u can, send me chap 2. arigato!!!!!
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Thank you :D I'm so glad you liked it! I sent you my entire Word document, so you're a little ahead of the game. I haven't even uploaded that much onto dA yet, but what I sent you is currently all I have ^^; I'll be spending some time on it in the coming two weeks and hopefully will get a few scenes done over the holiday.
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